Thursday, November 7, 2019

Dragonds slayer

In Room1 we were learnig to structure.
In our writing we ha dto include.

  • use a hook
  • describe the setting
  • describe the characters
  • describe the problem
  • describe the resolution
  • edit for spelling and punctuation
  • present my work to a peer for assessment
We were writing about a dragons slayer
Sorry if its so laggy.

Dragons slayer
In a time when dragons threatend mankind. There was only one man to fight. His name is Tarragon And riding on his brave battle horse black can you through the village in the pouring rain and the screaming thunder. Trying to pick a fight with a ginormous fire breathing Beast a 
dragon.

Both black bowl and tarragon arrived to the desert. While later Black Bull the mighty horse and tarragon the mighty fine fire breathing Beast fighting machine ended up in a Canyon a Dusty hollow Canyon. Tarragon was listening he could hear a strong noise he turned a corner and there it was all these howers looking for what he needed, he found it. The fire breathing dragon Tarragon pulled out his sharp pointed sword and is strongly built shield. The dragon saw Tarragon the dragon charged for Tarragon but Tarragon reserved his sword and stabbed the dragon right in the neck.

He finally killed the dragon but there was a problem a big problem when Tarragon was walking back to black bull his horse a baby dragon came out of nowhere then Tarragon realised he didn’t just kill a dragon he killed a mother. And there was another problem there was not just one adorable baby dragon there were three adorable baby dragons two more baby dragons popped out. So he loaded them on his horse black bull but there was no room for Tarragon so he had to walk. Before the end of the story Tarragon actually was really glad he got to take the baby dragons home because they really helped him with his work. THE END.

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