Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, May 12, 2020

Programming

In my class we were learning about programming.
I enjoyed watching the video.
I found it hard to log in to the sight.
My digital learning shows I can learn about programming.

Wednesday, April 29, 2020

Maori language

In my class we were learning maori and we had to make a poster.I enjoyed making the google drawing.I found it hard to get a good picture of a family.My digital learning shows I can learn different languages.Next time I would try to put more words on my poster. 

Monday, April 6, 2020

How coding works

In my class we had to watch a video on how coding works then we had to wright a piece of writing on how coding works.I enjoyed writing the story.I found it hard to get lots of facts.My digital learning shows I understand coding.Next time I would try to put more facts in my writing.


How coding works


How does coding work?

Computers are used for all sorts of things like PLaying games doing home work and even talking to friends and family. But there is something in side of your computer called coding.
If you playing a game you cant just say walk forward 10 steps you haved to tell it by computer coding.

There's a hole bunch of resins wy people would use coding. People put codes on doors and seceret messages. If you where trying to open something like a seceret message you would probaly haved to do a code It might be a turning code were you turn elements and if you get one wrong something sharp cuts you finger.

But In computers it's a bit differenet you need codes for stuff to work there was this coding game we were doing there were different numbers and each one changed eather the width,hight or move it around. Allot of codes use numbers.

I hope you enjoyed my Piece of writing and learnt some facts.

Thursday, November 21, 2019

Tom Trueheart

In Room 1 for writting we were writting a story about a boy could Tom Trueheart.
I enjoyed publishing my story on my blogg.
I found it hard to finish it and put it on my blogg by wednesday.


Tom Trueheart
Snow flakes hoverd through the air trees swead it the wind. Tom trueheart trugged through the snow trying to get to Lord Oldor’s castle to rescue his six brothers and the princess brides. But there was only one problam Tom trueheart was as small as a thumb. The evil wizard Lord Oldor casted a spell on him.

At last Tom trueheart finally arived at Lord Oldor’s castle. Tom trueheart wriggled through the snow to get to the immens red door. Eventually he got to the red door after he jumped out of the snow onto the foot steps two gigantic bulky bull dogs raced out of no where so Tom trueheart raced between the bull dogs legs and stabed both bull dogs eventully they transformed into stone.

Tom trueheart tride nugging the door open but it wouldent buge. Luckily being small helped him get threw the bottom of the red door. He got in hidding behind jars and books so the gards don’t see him he found a book that had lot’s of spells in it. The book was ginourmas but the book had a spell to make things float so he whispered the spell to make the book float. He tied a small rope to the book and sprinted to the dungen. There was his six brothers and the princess brides. He yelled out the spell to open the dungen then poofed himself and his six brothers with the princess brides back to there home land and destroyed the book.
THE END

Thursday, November 7, 2019

Dragonds slayer

In Room1 we were learnig to structure.
In our writing we ha dto include.

  • use a hook
  • describe the setting
  • describe the characters
  • describe the problem
  • describe the resolution
  • edit for spelling and punctuation
  • present my work to a peer for assessment
We were writing about a dragons slayer
Sorry if its so laggy.

Dragons slayer
In a time when dragons threatend mankind. There was only one man to fight. His name is Tarragon And riding on his brave battle horse black can you through the village in the pouring rain and the screaming thunder. Trying to pick a fight with a ginormous fire breathing Beast a 
dragon.

Both black bowl and tarragon arrived to the desert. While later Black Bull the mighty horse and tarragon the mighty fine fire breathing Beast fighting machine ended up in a Canyon a Dusty hollow Canyon. Tarragon was listening he could hear a strong noise he turned a corner and there it was all these howers looking for what he needed, he found it. The fire breathing dragon Tarragon pulled out his sharp pointed sword and is strongly built shield. The dragon saw Tarragon the dragon charged for Tarragon but Tarragon reserved his sword and stabbed the dragon right in the neck.

He finally killed the dragon but there was a problem a big problem when Tarragon was walking back to black bull his horse a baby dragon came out of nowhere then Tarragon realised he didn’t just kill a dragon he killed a mother. And there was another problem there was not just one adorable baby dragon there were three adorable baby dragons two more baby dragons popped out. So he loaded them on his horse black bull but there was no room for Tarragon so he had to walk. Before the end of the story Tarragon actually was really glad he got to take the baby dragons home because they really helped him with his work. THE END.

Thursday, October 17, 2019

Calaway

In Room1 for writing we were writing recounts.
In our success criteria we needed to use.
  • use some long and short sentences
  • use adjectives and adverbs
  • use juicy verbs to start a sentence
  • use a smile or metaphor
  • keep to one main idea in each paragraph
  • edit for spelling and punctuation
I found it hard to ceep my story to one main point.
I enjoyed putting my story on my blog


Calaway
On Friday morning after the trip to Canada I was so excited it was the day. The day we were going to Callaway Park. When we got there I sprinted all the way to the haunted castle. I went into the castle and there was an elevator and I press the button. Then a light went on. There was a skeleton and this screaming noise. I was really frightened. Next my sister and I went to the bumper cars. We went in two separate bumper cars.It was extremely fun, there was an older boy who smashed into me on the bumper cars and I waked my forehead on the steering wheel and I got a massive bruise. After we went on a couple more rides. my family and I got an ice cream. Mine was bubble gum flavour I was it was so delicious.  

Friday, September 27, 2019

Swimming compitition


In Room1 for writing we were aloud to choose something to write about.
I found it hard to blogge my story in time.
I enjoyed writing my story.

Swimming competition
It was a boiling hot day. I was just waiting to get to the pool. When we got to the pool I was a little nervous. When I got in the pool for warm up I felt really refreshed but the dumb things was some kid kicked my finger in warm up. When a man blew the whistle I was one of the first people to race. It was l00 metre IM. My finger was still sore but I still did it. I was really lucky because I won that race. After that race there were four more then we went home. Sunday we had to get up early because we had to be at the pool by 8.00am. I was really cold when we got there because I didn’t listen to my mum when she said, “PUT ON YOUR JACKET”! When we got inside some people were handing out some liquid energy jelly which tasted all right. When I set my swimming gear up I was saying in my head ‘do I want to do warm up after my finger getting kicked?’ I didn’t do warm up. I wasn’t as nervous as I was before. When the warm up was finished I went up for my race. It was 100 metre free. I was the 7th heat. I got put in lane 3 then the race started. I was getting tired but didn’t give up and I won that race. After the rest of the races there was a club relay. I was in it. We were so close to losing but we just won. Two days later we got our medals. I got 8 gold medals which were all my medals. The races I won them in were 100 metre IM, 




Wednesday, September 11, 2019

Speeches

In Room1 we were doing our speeches.

We included our pepeha.
We had to use a clear voice, stand still, speak loudly,
 go at our own pace, look up at the crowd, use expression and be confident.
Our speeches needed to include a rhetorical question and be persuasive. 

My speech was on climate change.
You can see this on my previous post.
This is my pepeha.

Tehei Mauri ora 
Ko Pepeha ki ahau
Ko Titirangi Te maunga  
Ko Taruheru Te awa
Ko Horouta Te waka  
Ko St Mary’s Star of the sea Te marae 
Noa Turanga-nui-a-Kiwa hau 
Ko Hato Maria toku kura
Ko ......... Toku whanau
Ko ...... Toku Mama 
Ko .... Toku Papa  
Ko Cole ahau 

No reira, tena koutou, tena koutou, tena koutou katoa.



Thursday, September 5, 2019

Climate change

In Room1 we were writing about climate change.
I found it hard to use good facts.
I enjoyed writing it on a google doc.

Climate change.
What is climate change and what is it doing to our planet? Climate change is different to global warming. Climate change is the change in our climate including wind, rain, snow, hail and temperature. Global warming refers to any changes in temperature across the earth.

People have been burning down trees in the Amazon rainforest to get more land for farming but the fires are out of control. There is so much smoke it's covering Brazil and you can see it from space.The wildfires are affecting the environment and destroying the Earth's lungs because the Amazon Forest gives us 20% of our oxygen. The Amazon Forest has millions of species of animals and they have all been getting threatened by the bush fires such as the green anaconda, the uakaris, the brown throated sloth and the poison dart frog. Also there are millions of tribe people that lived there.

Because of the warm weather, glaciers melting. This means the sea levels rare ising and there's flooding in owlands. Flooding lowlands is when there's less land and more water. The sea temperature is getting warmer and is killing the sea creatures.

Fossil fuels are also causing climate change. Fossil fuels such as coal, fuel, petrol and oil have been releasing too much CO2 (that is carbon dioxide) and that cuases hot air.

I think we need to stop climate change because it’s effecting nature. 

Friday, July 26, 2019

Winter

In Rom1 we have been learning to use descriptive words.
I found it tricky to finish it all in time and think of descriptive words.

Outside, frosty crackling branches waved in the mist. Steep snowy mountains glistened under the sky. Still silent sky hovered over the hills while my legs shivered in the frosty cold snow.