An Exciting Moment

For writing we had to writ about an exciting moment.

I injoyed creating my story.

I found it hard to make it that interesting.

An exciting moment

“Lets go cole” said my step dad said. We hoped in the car and drove to my uncle zarn.

My uncle was ready to go so we left I was so excited for my ferst time ever going hunting. We were there I jumeped out of the truck. We went into the boosh and one of the dogs were chasing a pig but it went way to far so we could it back. “Gy’s look” said my uncle there was a red deer it was amazing but my cousin was being so loud that my uncle missed the deer. So we went back to the truck. But it was still sooper cool to experinc that.