In my class we were writing a puppy description on our teachers puppys. She sold them so there not hers now.
I enjoyed writing the story.
I found it hard to use all of my plan.
My digital learning shows I can use the best adjectives and make a very descriptive piece of work.
Next time I would try to use all of my plan.
Puppy Description
"Your so cute." I mentioned. His tail curled up like a spring. His soft fur as white as a cloud and as fluffy as a pillow. He squirmed in my arms while his black moist nose rubbed against my hand. I let him go he zoomed around the classroom, his floppy carmel ears flicking into the air. Zuko growls as he has a intense wrestle with his brothers.
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