Mystery story

In my class we had to write a mystery story.I enjoyed doing the writing.
I enjoyed doing the writing.
I found it hard to choose witch story to write about.
My digital learning shows I can use adjectives in my writing.
Next time I might add some stuff to my success criteria.

I got called into saint mary's school to crack a case I raced into my slick black ferrari and zoomed all the way there. There were sharp corners to drift around and lots of cars to pass. There I was I quickly drifted around the corner into a perfect park. I hoped out of the car in my black and white soot with  my breef case. There I went to see Mrs Aperahama she said a teacher stole her prize stash of sweet treets. That second I wrote down some suspects that I thought would have done the crime

 Here's my list of suspects. 

Mrs Hickling

Mrs B

Mrs McGuigan

So I waited till lunch time to ask the suspects some questions. While I was waiting I took some photos and reported them to the New Zealand agentcy. Something that I found supesuis is that when I was sneaking around in room2 when they were out for PE  there were billions of chocolate rappers in the rubbish bin. It was lunch time I ask Mrs B some questions and she said she was doing reading with other kids when it happened and I did see her with some kids in a class. Then I asked mrs Mcguigan some questions and she said she had cameras installed yesterday and she was also on the phone to the electrician. So there was one teacher left Mrs Hickling and she wasn't speaking and the photos of the chocolate rappers were from here class. I think I had figured out the case it was DUN DUN DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNN

Answer below

Mrs Hickling

That will be a $25 fine.