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Morena Cole, great to see that you have given your poster another go, you have thought really carefully about the different elements this time, ka pai. You have thought about her clothing and personal features well. Next time it would be even better if you thought of the specific boat she was travelling on when she went missing. Ma te wa, Miss Hickling.
Kia ora Cole, I really liked this missing poster it is really desciptive and i dont think you need to to be more specific like my friend zudais said. BLog ya later
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Morena Cole, great to see that you have given your poster another go, you have thought really carefully about the different elements this time, ka pai. You have thought about her clothing and personal features well. Next time it would be even better if you thought of the specific boat she was travelling on when she went missing. Ma te wa, Miss Hickling.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Cole, i really liked this missing poster it is really descriptive.
ReplyDeletebut can u please be more specific
Blog you later
-Zudais
Kia ora Cole, i really liked this missing poster it is really descriptive.
ReplyDeletebut can u please be more specific
Blog you later
-vincey no hacker
Kia ora Cole, I really liked this missing poster it is really desciptive and i dont think you need to to be more specific like my friend zudais said.
ReplyDeleteBLog ya later