In my class we had to write about a video called teeth.
I enjoyed writing my story.
I found it hard to use lots of my plan
My digital learning shows I can use the best adjectives.
TEETH
zzzzzzzz! The two men launched there long fishing rods into the clear glistening water. The boat rocked back and forth with the small courent pushing them into the distance. The to men relaxed waiting for a big tug on their rods. The clear blue sky with chirping birds in the trees swaying side to side.
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