In my class we were writing letters to the parent that looked after us at camp.
i enjoyed writing my letter.
I found it hard to put lots of sentences in my paragraphs.
Next time I would put more sentences in my paragraphs.
Cole
St mary's school
40 campion RD
gisborne
5.11.2020
Dear Renee
Thank you for all of your hard work looking after us. We had a blast. We did so many fun activities.
One of my highlights was the survivor game. I really liked being a possum and getting the food and water and taking a life of you.
So thank you for coming to support us. We had the best time EVER!
Ma te wa
Cole
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